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Smiling Lolita,
Her eyes can see deeper,
Don't let her innocence fool you.

Lovely Lolita,
Sitting in a window,
Wishing for a new day.

Depressed Lolita,
Lying on the floor,
Blood pooling from her wrists.

Destroyed Lolita,
Six feet underground,
Praying for another chance.
er.....don't really know what this is....and it makes no sense....i saw some lolita artwork here on DA and suddenly this came to mind ^-^;; sorry if it sucks....

EDIT: and now that's it's about a year later, and after receiving a comment that suggested i should reverse the order of the poem, and i did so. ^^
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8Happiness Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2011

Smiling Lolita > Lovely Lolita > Depressed Lolita > Destroyed Lolita.
You may change order to this, to me particularly it sounds much striking. <3
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XxXBuri-ChanXxX Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
i actually completely forgot about this poem XD Thank you for the advice, i think i'll change it. :D
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